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Thursday, August 13, 2020

External correspondence - Newsletter

STANLY ORGANICS LTD                                                        Customer Newsletter

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Reduce Plastic Waste Scheme

Dear (customer name),


We are inviting you to be part of our new scheme. As we want to work with you to change the way customers buy everyday products. This was planned to reduce plastic waste that's filling up our landfills.

- We want to stop putting plastic into our landfills; this can be biodegradable/degradable plastic bags, and bottles only break down in specific conditions.

-All plastic bags now replaced with hessian bags (made from flax and hemp fibres). First bag free with purchases over $50. Or we will provide recycled cardboard boxes (and help carry to your car).

-Most liquids products (liquid soap, shampoo, dishwashing liquid, etc) now available in 'fill your own' containers. Bring your own container to fill and get 5% discount.

-Fresh vegetables - instead of plastic bags, try re-useable waxed cotton bags to keep food fresh.

Please support our new update regarding our plastic scheme, and thank you for your ongoing support.


Regards,
George Davis

Customer Service



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1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Raeven

    Your format looks great! Well done. Check the spelling of your company name. It is different in the banner to the email address you have provided at the end. Also check your spelling of 'Road'. ;)
    Re-read the first bullet point. Does it make sense? Remember you are trying to communicate as clearly as possible to the customer, and they know nothing about this scheme so far. Add/remove words as needed to get your point across while maintaining a formal tone.

    Ka rawe! :)

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